| "The Way I Was Before" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 23:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
See this?
This is me,
CRYING MY GODDAMN EYEBALLS OUT THANKS TO YOU!!!
I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY! |
Reviewed By: fusionHA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this fic so many times, I can't count anymore! Great job...again! ^ ^ It's so hard to find a timeless story like this one!
Just.... beautiful! |
Reviewed By: Bulma On: September 23, 2002 17:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!
The way you chose to write Vegetasīs personality was incredible!
Congratulations!
[ ]īs, Bulma. |
Reviewed By: Jesa Jaisai On: July 12, 2002 15:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful!
This is a great piece of work! I really enjoyed it! |
Reviewed By: Majin_Ouji [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 12:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
I read this not too long ago. It's amazing how you translate A-N-G-S-T to us readers. I am a firm believer that there is no such thing as perpetual "sunshine and roses". A moment of that is all we ever get and it usually comes at the end of every story. |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2002 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not sure if I've reviewed here but oh well! I LOVE this fic!!! I cried during the last chapter! It was soo well written!!! ^_^ One of my favs! |
Reviewed By: Lady Hella [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2002 05:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well. . . i had to re-read it. 'Had to' as in had to CRY all over again!! *grabs a kleenex*
You kick serious ass with the angst.
And romance.
And characterisation.
And every-freaking-thing!! Now i'm off to leave a review for Requiem in Blue, i forgot to before.
Lady Hella |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2002 10:40 EDT
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!! This story really was amazing. You kept them in character and at the end it all came together so wonderfully. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 24, 2002 06:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY KAMI!!! What a chapter! What an ending! What a story! I became so entranced by it that I wasn't even aware that I was crying. I felt Veggie's pain while he was in hell and Bulma's anticipation as she waited for him to return. And don't get me started on the lemon. Let's just say that it was the most spiritual B/V encounter that I've ever read. I literally had a lump in my throat. A FUCKING MASTERPIECE!!! |
Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2002 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautifull I even cryed. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2002 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to review it here, too, to encourage you to update faster. Is it working? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 25, 2002 23:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG what a chapter! It left me with a lump in my throat. Excellent. Brilliant. Beautiful. Awesome. This is grade A stuff. I hope Bulma gets her Veggie back. Whatever happens I'm sure I'll need a box of tissues. |
Reviewed By: Dark Saiyan Prince [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2002 21:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. Your writting never fails to amaze me. Nice work. UPDATE SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: Hetchi On: April 01, 2002 00:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was prehaps the best fanfic I have ever read( And I've read more then a person can count). Please write some more chapters!!!!! I really like a use of Vegeta's native language! |
Reviewed By: theblueone On: March 23, 2002 22:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome. i have never read a b/v fic during that time period, right before the Buu saga, that i enjoyed so much. you are a very talented writer. keep up the good work and i'll keep reading! |
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