| "The Way I Was Before" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2002 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to review it here, too, to encourage you to update faster. Is it working? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 25, 2002 23:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG what a chapter! It left me with a lump in my throat. Excellent. Brilliant. Beautiful. Awesome. This is grade A stuff. I hope Bulma gets her Veggie back. Whatever happens I'm sure I'll need a box of tissues. |
Reviewed By: Dark Saiyan Prince [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2002 21:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. Your writting never fails to amaze me. Nice work. UPDATE SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: Hetchi On: April 01, 2002 00:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was prehaps the best fanfic I have ever read( And I've read more then a person can count). Please write some more chapters!!!!! I really like a use of Vegeta's native language! |
Reviewed By: theblueone On: March 23, 2002 22:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome. i have never read a b/v fic during that time period, right before the Buu saga, that i enjoyed so much. you are a very talented writer. keep up the good work and i'll keep reading! |
Reviewed By: Annesta ap Diarmuid On: March 23, 2002 00:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This was excellent! your writing had abosolutely no grammatical errors in it (a rare find),and your writing style has to be the most intense and descriptive I've read yet (and that includes published novels). I hope you plan or are professional, because you sure seem to have the talent! I LOVE your story's plot! I would REALLY enjoy reading anymore chapters you have in mind for it! |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2002 20:19 EST
Comment/Review:
This is really good. I'm glad I decided to check this fic out. Your descriptions are colorful to say the least and everyone remains in perfect charater. I look forward to reading future chapters...EM |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2002 04:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! What an amazingly, beautiful chapter! You do both characters (and little Trunks too ^_^) amazing justice with your beautiful writing style. Close to the end I looked at my scroll bar and realized it was almost over and I wanted to cry. It was that breathtaking. This is seriously one of the best fics I've ever read anywhere. Hell, this is one of the best stories I've ever read. Please do not think I am just saying this. I hope many other people check out this fic. If you don't mind I'd like to give this fic a little free advertisment on my next couple of updates. I really think this is that good. I can't wait for the next update. Once again, WOW.-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2002 00:25 EST
Comment/Review:
I just reread this and I'm still blown away. Just thought you should know ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 03, 2002 04:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. Brilliant. Magnificently written. This is one of the most incredible B/V fics that I've ever read, specially since it takes place just before the Buu saga, a timeline a lot of authors seen to neglect writing about. The lemons, the angst and the depth of emotion left me breathless. Truly a piece of work. You should be very proud of this story and I hope you continue to write more (^_^). |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2002 03:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are awesome! And your story isn't bad either. ^_~. But seriously, your writing style is so beautiful that at times it's like reading poetry. I really love the way you use the five senses. I kept telling myself I'd read one more chapter then go to bed but I couldn't stop until I finished. I agree that not enough people write about the marriage side of thier relationship, which the view that most of my fics come from. I like how you dealt with Vegeta. Though no one can know for sure how he would act in an intimate setting, I believe your account is very plausable. I can honestly say that this is one of the best fanfics I've read here at mediaminer and that anything you post from here on out you should know you'll always have one sure reader. Hope to see more of your stuff soon.-JB |
Reviewed By: biggirl On: March 02, 2002 21:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So romantic. I could not stop crying when Bulma saw Vegita's memories from childhood. Please send more! |
Reviewed By: me!! On: March 02, 2002 18:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow..this story is truly, truly deep. i enjoy this everytime i read it and i can't get enough of it. glad that you kept the characters out of 'ooc'ness for they portray bulma and vegeta perfectly i believe. keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Eilleen On: March 02, 2002 17:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah. Very intense. I love it. :) |
Reviewed By: Ariele On: March 02, 2002 16:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you think i'm a little biased reviewing this?^_^ |
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