| "The Way I Was Before" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: kendraless On: March 02, 2002 13:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story, It was ehmmm intense |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2002 13:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo this story rocks. It's so original aswell. I think I've seen a story with a simular storyline. But not quite like this. And yours is much MUCH better. You can tell it was really well thought out, and you put your best into this story. And it really shows. You are a great writer, and I can't wait to see more. |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2002 09:17 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow this story just gets better and better! This chapter was amazing, i would have liked, perhaps, to have seen more detail focused on each event during the bond, but thats just me and my obsession for detail showing lol. It is probably better for not having too much bogging it down, a mistake that i am all too apt to fall into! I loved the fact that the bond was more angst than pleasure filled, after all sharing thoughts with Vegeta would hrdly be soft light, and roses lol. Is their gpoing to be another chapter to this, brilliant, excellent, wonderful story? I sure as hell hope so *^_^* Oh and now your on MM.org, you should check out the forums... lol its where i spend most of my time... come on... join the insanity dude! |
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