| "The Way I Was Before" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Azrial On: December 09, 2002 04:12 EST
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This was a really good story! I enjoyed the intensity that remained between Vegeta and Bulma even after all the years of marriage. I found personally the romantic scenes to be so much more intense b/c of that fact. Their personalities were bang on and that too made the story that much more believable. I look forward to seeing more of your work :D |
Reviewed By: Jasp_jedi4hire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 01:09 EDT
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This was great. I loved the inner conflict going on. You did a beautiful job. |
Reviewed By: bvtbear On: October 12, 2002 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the best I have read in a long, long, long time. You have a real talent for writing, the style...kinda makes you feel you were there. Very creative, especially with the languages and good use of other characters. You also have the imaging technique down, making it easy to imagine what's going on. You should be a writer but if you won't do it professionally, then by all means: Keep doing it here! |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 23:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm. You need one more review. Make it an even thirty.
There ya go. |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 23:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
What the fuck?
No, seriously, WHAT the FUCK?
I haven't cried in like, AGES AND AGES!
So now my eyes really hurt, dammit!
Because this story is so awesome, it made me cry!
Though... it IS quite refreshing, y'know. Ah well. Off to find some kleenex... |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 23:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
See this?
This is me,
CRYING MY GODDAMN EYEBALLS OUT THANKS TO YOU!!!
I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY! |
Reviewed By: fusionHA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this fic so many times, I can't count anymore! Great job...again! ^ ^ It's so hard to find a timeless story like this one!
Just.... beautiful! |
Reviewed By: Bulma On: September 23, 2002 17:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!
The way you chose to write Vegetasīs personality was incredible!
Congratulations!
[ ]īs, Bulma. |
Reviewed By: Jesa Jaisai On: July 12, 2002 15:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful!
This is a great piece of work! I really enjoyed it! |
Reviewed By: Majin_Ouji [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 12:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
I read this not too long ago. It's amazing how you translate A-N-G-S-T to us readers. I am a firm believer that there is no such thing as perpetual "sunshine and roses". A moment of that is all we ever get and it usually comes at the end of every story. |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2002 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not sure if I've reviewed here but oh well! I LOVE this fic!!! I cried during the last chapter! It was soo well written!!! ^_^ One of my favs! |
Reviewed By: Lady Hella [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2002 05:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well. . . i had to re-read it. 'Had to' as in had to CRY all over again!! *grabs a kleenex*
You kick serious ass with the angst.
And romance.
And characterisation.
And every-freaking-thing!! Now i'm off to leave a review for Requiem in Blue, i forgot to before.
Lady Hella |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2002 10:40 EDT
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!! This story really was amazing. You kept them in character and at the end it all came together so wonderfully. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 24, 2002 06:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY KAMI!!! What a chapter! What an ending! What a story! I became so entranced by it that I wasn't even aware that I was crying. I felt Veggie's pain while he was in hell and Bulma's anticipation as she waited for him to return. And don't get me started on the lemon. Let's just say that it was the most spiritual B/V encounter that I've ever read. I literally had a lump in my throat. A FUCKING MASTERPIECE!!! |
Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2002 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautifull I even cryed. |
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