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| "Interludes" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 09:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good, very perceptive and deep, obviously carefully thought over. and the phrasing was good too. i love the way you write inuyasha, you make him a strong and very complex character, that's always thrilling to find! please update some more....
| Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 16:02 CST
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I really enjoyed reading your story. I like the way you conveyed their emotions and thoughts thoughout and making appropriate for whatever scroll from manga you are doing. Keep up the great work, and I hope you update soon.
| Reviewed By: LDYMOON On: March 02, 2006 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE ON STORY, LOOKING TO READ MORE
| Reviewed By: can't wait to read more On: March 02, 2006 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait to read more, it was very good.
| Title: FFRG Review
Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 19:57 CST
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First off, overall, you did a pretty good job editing. I found only a couple mistakes. "Might I see here there again?" In that sentence, I think you meant to put "her" instead of "here." Also, in this sentence, "But my hatred stayed strong holding me up and giving me the strength..." I think a comma is required between "strong" and "holding." I really liked the writing style- some sentences, and even entire paragraphs, were very nicely worded. I also liked the small bits of poetry used to convey Kagome and Kikyo's thoughts. I enjoyed this, and I thank you for submitting it to the FFRG!
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