| "Sentimental Value" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2002 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so like Vegeta saying they should make a monument of his greatest accoplishments...so true! A great story! |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2002 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaii chapter! Loved it! |
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2002 03:03 EST
Comment/Review:
this was so great!! i loved it. it was so sentimental and yet you kept vegeta SO in character! beautifully done! i'm going to be reading more of your fics because i enjoyed this one! hehe. seriously dude, keep up the great work!! bravo!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 09, 2002 01:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so sweet. You did a good job on the hentai, well at least a better job at what i did on mine. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 09, 2002 01:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so sweet. You did a good job on the hentai, well at least a better job at what i did on mine. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2002 22:31 EST
Comment/Review:
well now that my heart has stopped pounding and I can breath again *heheh* I must say this was really good.. it was sexy yet tasteful, I haven't seen the episode where he comes back because of the "good people" wish, and I'm dying too, but I did see Bulma's cries of anguish, this is a great way to see how that night ended :) thanks for the great story! |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2002 22:30 EST
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well now that my heart has stopped pounding and I can breath again *heheh* I must say this was really good.. it was sexy yet tasteful, I haven't seen the episode where he comes back because of the "good people" wish, and I'm dying too, but I did see Bulma's cries of anguish, this is a great way to see how that night ended :) thanks for the great story! |
Reviewed By: storm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2002 19:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute as I thought it would be! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2002 16:45 EST
Comment/Review:
roflmbo, oh thank you! i needed the laugh! BTW, read my story! It's been up there for half a day already! Sheesh! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 04, 2002 15:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap. Bulma had to be tinkled pink that night considering what she went thru when Goku told her that Vegita had died. I saw dbz in japanese and her tears, screams and cries were heart wrenching. Good job. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2002 08:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kalahan? lol, ok....
Man, this was once again good. I don't think you have to worry about your lemon. This was good without being too graphic, which I don't like.... OH! They get to keep the bed? lol So, hurry up and update the others, silly! I'm itching to read! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2002 22:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!! Cool! I'm doing a little shorty too. lol, should be fun... gg I'll go start on it now! lol
I like this, write the second part! i like I like! |
Reviewed By: storm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2002 20:07 EST
Comment/Review:
Of course! There aren't many "conceptions" of Bra or much about Bra stories anywhere. Start a trend! |
Reviewed By: Raila [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2002 09:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This was good! I loved this. Make chapter 2! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 02, 2002 07:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, yes please write chap 2:Bra. Here, let me help you to your desk (^_^). I really loved this one. You took a passionate moment and described it in such a way that I was damn jealous and found myself sighing (I really do need to get a life). Can't wait to see what juiciness you come up with, but here's a suggestion: for Bra's conception how about dressing up the bedroom with candles, flowers, lavender insense, soft music (take your pick), it could be raining outside (that's always romantic) or it could be a hot and sultry summer's night. They could be sipping on a little wine and you can have Veggie press Bulma up against the ceiling and they can start there caressing and kissing, etc., and eventually work their way down to that special piece of furniture. Whatever you decide to do I'm sure I'll need a cold shower afterwards (^_~). Pls update this one asap. Later. |
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