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Title: o_O
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2014 14:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Funny and fluffy! ♥
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Title: I LOVED IT
Reviewed By: LUISA On: July 13, 2005 19:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really loved it and i hope you make one after that like i dont know im not you well anyways i liked it alot
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Title: marron1
Reviewed By: marron1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 23:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it.
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Reviewed By: angel69 On: September 25, 2003 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved the story. It was good and the style of writting was great. I really don't see anything you need to fix but i can't wait to read the rest of your work and the up comming one's to.
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Reviewed By: Blue Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 11:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute story, not your best but cute. I di like your writing style very much though.
Keep it up.
BS |
Reviewed By: Abby On: February 07, 2003 15:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Both chapters are wonderfully romantic and sweet with some humor thrown in just right! Good work! Keep writing please! |
Reviewed By: Gothic Prince Vejita [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 17:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a pretty damn good Veggie/Bulma storie. They are like my all-time fave couple from DBZ. |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 20:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was such a sweet fic! Oh! I love how It contrasts their different moods and attidues between two very different times i their relationship. And the attitude they have as they "look back" is perfect- very comfortable with each other. It's great. Incredibly sweet! |
Reviewed By: Katya On: November 18, 2002 22:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this story before i think on ff.net before the F*cking NC-17 ban. I liked this story very much >:) |
Reviewed By: ssj trungeta [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 17:01 EST
Comment/Review:
Good lemon. It's simple but effective. What more can I say? |
Reviewed By: ssj trungeta [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 17:01 EST
Comment/Review:
Good lemon. It's simple but effective. What more can I say? |
Reviewed By: ssj trungeta [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 17:01 EST
Comment/Review:
Good lemon. It's simple but effective. What more can I say? |
Reviewed By: Lindsay On: August 01, 2002 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that was a very cute story you should keep writing, your very good at it i really enjoyed it.
lots of love
lindsay |
Reviewed By: tinie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 18:27 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good little "remembrance" story ^_~ I liked it but then again, i like all of your stories. I hope you keep writing, it keeps me insane in the saneness that goes on around here ^_^ tinie |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 23, 2002 12:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I liked this story so much that I'm going to read it again! Great story realy it is!^_^ |
Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2002 19:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is really good. It's kind of funny, too * I really like your work. Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2002 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so like Vegeta saying they should make a monument of his greatest accoplishments...so true! A great story! |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2002 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaii chapter! Loved it! |
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2002 03:03 EST
Comment/Review:
this was so great!! i loved it. it was so sentimental and yet you kept vegeta SO in character! beautifully done! i'm going to be reading more of your fics because i enjoyed this one! hehe. seriously dude, keep up the great work!! bravo!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 09, 2002 01:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so sweet. You did a good job on the hentai, well at least a better job at what i did on mine. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 09, 2002 01:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so sweet. You did a good job on the hentai, well at least a better job at what i did on mine. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2002 22:31 EST
Comment/Review:
well now that my heart has stopped pounding and I can breath again *heheh* I must say this was really good.. it was sexy yet tasteful, I haven't seen the episode where he comes back because of the "good people" wish, and I'm dying too, but I did see Bulma's cries of anguish, this is a great way to see how that night ended :) thanks for the great story! |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2002 22:30 EST
Comment/Review:
well now that my heart has stopped pounding and I can breath again *heheh* I must say this was really good.. it was sexy yet tasteful, I haven't seen the episode where he comes back because of the "good people" wish, and I'm dying too, but I did see Bulma's cries of anguish, this is a great way to see how that night ended :) thanks for the great story! |
Reviewed By: storm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2002 19:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute as I thought it would be! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2002 16:45 EST
Comment/Review:
roflmbo, oh thank you! i needed the laugh! BTW, read my story! It's been up there for half a day already! Sheesh! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 04, 2002 15:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap. Bulma had to be tinkled pink that night considering what she went thru when Goku told her that Vegita had died. I saw dbz in japanese and her tears, screams and cries were heart wrenching. Good job. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2002 08:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kalahan? lol, ok....
Man, this was once again good. I don't think you have to worry about your lemon. This was good without being too graphic, which I don't like.... OH! They get to keep the bed? lol So, hurry up and update the others, silly! I'm itching to read! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2002 22:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!! Cool! I'm doing a little shorty too. lol, should be fun... gg I'll go start on it now! lol
I like this, write the second part! i like I like! |
Reviewed By: storm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2002 20:07 EST
Comment/Review:
Of course! There aren't many "conceptions" of Bra or much about Bra stories anywhere. Start a trend! |
Reviewed By: Raila [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2002 09:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This was good! I loved this. Make chapter 2! |
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