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| "Demon Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: SRY
Reviewed By: Paper-Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! Extremly sry for the long wait! I had classess, finals, then there was a shooting at ths school and a death in the fmaily..my life has been horrible for the past few months...*sigh* But, I'm back now! and Feleing great1So, I will be reivewing now so.. It was a great chapter! Everythign about this one rocked! you made up and that is what I have been waiting for! Keep up the good work! Once again, sorry...
| Title: SRY
Reviewed By: Paper-Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! Extremly sry for the long wait! I had classess, finals, then there was a shooting at ths school and a death in the fmaily..my life has been horrible for the past few months...*sigh* But, I'm back now! and Feleing great1So, I will be reivewing now so.. It was a great chapter! Everythign about this one rocked! you made up and that is what I have been waiting for! Keep up the good work! Once again, sorry...
| Reviewed By: twister's revenge On: April 17, 2006 00:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love this story !!!!!!! it's very intresting and origal i love Orian's wings anything that has wings is good on my list i love them so much!!!!!! this story is very good though and i hope you update soon !!!
| Title: When?????
Reviewed By: Raedah On: April 09, 2006 05:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
When are you going to continue the story? I can't wait to read the continous. Love it so much.
| Title: Nah!
Reviewed By: silver wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good, I just have a few things about your Japanese stuff. I don't for sure if it's right, but from what I know (which is a bit) Haru would have probably called Hatori Sempai instead of kun since he was an upper classmen. Just a few other gramatical stuff, but other than that, I really liked it. I'll read the next chapter soon. Silver
| Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Silver Wolf (Me) On: March 02, 2006 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, I liked it for the most part, the only thing I wasn't so big on was the listing of deatails, but other than that, I was wonderful and really good! I can't wait to read chapter two!
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