| "Love at first sight?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: great
Reviewed By: HIM13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the paring and it was great you should write more i like hinata and sasuke paring also i would enjoyed it if you could do that
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Reviewed By: durbie On: April 09, 2006 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this fanfiction a lot you should consider writing a second chapter like five years from now bout all the kids it could be really funny
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: digi-pope On: April 04, 2006 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
best story of temari. ever. but the part with naruto being the caretaker? i think it should have been shikamaru, but what do i kno its your story. wite more temari stuff. its AWESOME
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