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| "Naresome no Netsuai" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: fire maiden On: May 17, 2006 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i really luv it. people are so mean not writing a review for this great story! update soon!
| Reviewed By: Kikyophobia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 20:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I don't really know what to say. It was pretty good. The chapters definitely could've been longer. Not only that, but you really need more detail and depth to your writing. Also, a lot of the characters were very much out of character. I know it's hard to put them in the right perspective, but that's what differentiates a good fanfiction from a great fanfiction.
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