| "Heaven and Earth" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: DemonGoddess On: September 19, 2006 06:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I've read this a few times! You REALLY know how to craft a story! Very well done.
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Reviewed By: reyette On: April 09, 2006 18:36 CDT
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oi, this was great. it was amazing how you wrote alot of the things the way I would have liked to... like u know how i wanted inuyasha to be with sesshoumaru, but i didn't want kagome all bastardized either. i knew she would take it hard but i knew she would be understanding as well. when i read other fics, at some point, they portray the characters or make them do things that i don't necessarily agree with, which is why i thought yours was pretty neat. even the whole taking turns to be seme thing.. cuz i wouldn't have been able to decide which should be seme, cuz i think they both have a dominant streak and wouldn't automatically assume a submissive position for good. u know? lol. :) thanks for completing this. i read this when it was all complete and noticed that you updated the stories very quickly? well, in any case, thanks for completing it and not leaving ur readers hanging in the air.
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Title: Chapter 21
Reviewed By: Snowfall1 On: March 20, 2006 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! Such hot Sesshoumaru/Inuyasha shmex! Hehe, loved the ropes and special lubricant.-----I almost cried at the end. Tears welled up in my eyes. I just hope that Sesshoumaru doesn't take Inuyasha's sadness as a sign that Inuyasha would rather be with Kagome. I'm glad that you don't make Kagome so two dimensional like most people do and your approach to the situation was very plausible. Although, I would think that Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru would find just the two of them enough to take out Naraku and leave Kagome with her friends. Kouga isn't powerful enough to take Naraku out on his own. Heck, Kagura even got the best of him. I think that Kagome needs more protection than she is being left with. Inu and Sess are more powerful together than the whole of the rest of Inu's group. I was a bit surprised that Kagome would think of going with Kouga, but then I figured that she really didn't have anyone else. I wonder how Sango, Miroku, and shippo are going to take it. Sango was really pissed before. She will probably insist on going with Kagome. I don't know about Miroku though. He does have the slight ability to sense jewel shards and doesn't condemn the brothers, although he does feel protective of Kagome.-----It will be interesting to see what you do with that whole scenario. Great chappie!-----Snowfall
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Reviewed By: Darkrosse On: March 17, 2006 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent work as usual!
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Reviewed By: Tsubasa no Tenshi On: March 16, 2006 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story! Intriguing and exciting. I love it!
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Reviewed By: Darkrosse On: March 13, 2006 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great! I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what InuYasha is going to do.
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Reviewed By: kiraralash-chan On: March 13, 2006 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: lovely devil On: March 09, 2006 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o my god please continue i wanna see wat happens this story is the best that i've read and i've read alot of stories.keep up the work i gotta read the new chapter.
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Reviewed By: druspikeangel1 On: March 04, 2006 18:40 CST
Comment/Review:
excellent as always
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Reviewed By: Cyndi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 02:21 CST
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Sesshoumaru's struggle is very intriguing in this. I'm sure Inuyasha will continue to enjoy being the top dog while he has the chance >3
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Reviewed By: druspikeangel1 On: March 03, 2006 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes loved this chappie lots of goodness
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Reviewed By: angeluswilliam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 17:42 CST
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excellent overall, waiting for the update.
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