"Stoneheart" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Shadowreborn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2002 21:10 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You are so right sometimes it is nice to write something short and sweet. Its also nice to read that every now and then as well. I liked the story and it said just want it needed to say. Under stated cqan be a very good thing , and here is is. Good job i will be reading more of your work. I hope at least. |
Reviewed By: Tidus On: May 31, 2002 19:19 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I wish it had a little more romance...and less of
Lulu saying mean things to Wakka...but I enjoyed it.
Maybe Tidus could have kissed Lulu too hehehe ;) |