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| "Demons In Hiding" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 15:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
i would like more please.
| Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: RavenSilverKat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never read a vampire version before, but I am loving it! But....there is no possible way ANYone could steal vampire's. The idea of them or any powers that they have because there has been someone who has given them that specific power before. Besides, they always have the same kind of powers. I can' wait to read the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Daisuke Hiwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the way you wrote this.It was very detailed.I really didn't see any spelling mistake,so you're good.I really liked this chapter though I would like it more if there was would be some lemon.....Other than that I really love it.This was the first fic I read here on Media Miner,so I love the fic.Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Windgoddess-sama On: July 10, 2006 18:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story, but I do have a little complaint. When you have author notes, its best to put it either in the begining or at the end. Its actually very annoying to read a story and have author notes litter the chapter. I love the story idea, but when I come across the notes, I want to stop reading and not touch the story any more. Please don't take this as a flame, because its not meant as a flame, but as something to think about. I don't know about others, but author notes in the middle of the story is just annoying.
| Title: Love it Lots!
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 22:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOOH this story is getting even more exciting. So pleased you updated. cheers!
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good, different. Only reason I don't give it a 10 is because you do not include all the characters in Naruto. You have his fellow students who are ninja in the cannon, why not include Haku as a student prodigy in the same grade, with Zabuza involved (older lover, werewolf drugdealer perhaps?) on top of that, put Hinata in there, I have seen nothing of her yet, I'd like her to be more outgoing with Naruto now claimed by Sasuke, it'd be kinda cool to me. Anyway, only real reason its not a 10 is because its been other 6 months and you only have 3 chapters up, its a tad saddening, in truth. Don't take this the wrong way, I like this one, but update again soon, even if it is so soon after your latest update.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good, different. Only reason I don't give it a 10 is because you do not include all the characters in Naruto. You have his fellow students who are ninja in the cannon, why not include Haku as a student prodigy in the same grade, with Zabuza involved (older lover, werewolf drugdealer perhaps?) on top of that, put Hinata in there, I have seen nothing of her yet, I'd like her to be more outgoing with Naruto now claimed by Sasuke, it'd be kinda cool to me. Anyway, only real reason its not a 10 is because its been other 6 months and you only have 3 chapters up, its a tad saddening, in truth. Don't take this the wrong way, I like this one, but update again soon, even if it is so soon after your latest update.
| Reviewed By: DragonKeeperMihiru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Yay! It's SasuNaru *hugs you*. *Starts doing happy dance*... *cough* anyways, update soon! I must have the next chapter! please?
| Reviewed By: tasukis_gecko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the plot and all of the characters personalities. I noticed that you love to describe everything in as much detail as possible, it might help the story a bit if you summarized some of the less important things, and use the full blown descriptions for things that matter more. As an example in the first chapter when all of the characters were having a get together on the school lawn, you described what each character was wearing in detail, even though their clothes didn't have much to do with what was going on. I think you would make a killer fashion designer though... Anyway sorry to get all preachy, just tryin to give you some feedback ^_^.
| Reviewed By: loveless101 On: April 17, 2006 22:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter, can't wait to hear what Neji has to say! Update soon.
| Title: WRITE MORE!!!!!
Reviewed By: fLcL_FFx_lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just write more!!!! it's really good
| Reviewed By: randomHime On: March 13, 2006 10:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Vampires. Anime. The 2 go hand in hand, so i cant sya its very origanal, but its a good plot, and its written very well
| Reviewed By: DragonKeeperMihiru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This story kicks ass! YOu are a cruel, cruel author to keep your loyal fans waiting to long for the next chapter. I hope he agrees *Is a major SasuNaru fan*, but what ever happens, happens, and I will continue to read this story *whispers make it SasuNaru* =D
| Title: awesome
Reviewed By: loveless101 On: March 05, 2006 21:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Truthfully, I haven't read any fics with vampires in them before. I like where this is going. Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon.
| Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: Kikilo Lea On: March 03, 2006 20:50 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic. Its so great! Normally, I don't like fanfics where the main characters are vampires, but this story made me think about my opinion.
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