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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like where this is headed man I'll finish later but if I read too much at once I start to zone out.
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I really like how you involve various couples in the fic. even though Kazuma and Kanami are my favorite. Please continue writing!
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Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you write, it so clear and interesting! I don't have to figure out what you're trying to say due to a bunch of spelling errors or incorrect words altogether, not that I'm the best at grammar or spelling but I don't write fanfics cuz I'm a coward, lol!, but anyway, I so love the imagination, and understanding of the characters, again, it makes the "story" so clear and I love that. I can totally get into this as if I never stoped watching the series! I hope that you continue to write after you get out of school; I'd buy your work, for sure! ~T *btw I don't give out many 10's ;)
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Reviewed By: LiLlAdY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gotta update soon I really like this story and there arent that many Kazuma and Kanami stories out there ^-^
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Title: Thisis really good!
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 23:14 CDT
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Please keep going! I'd like to see what happens! Keep going!
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Reviewed By: Shima On: July 01, 2006 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!tata....
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Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 17:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep it up! Great story, I really like it. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 20:29 CST
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I think it's going well so far, and I don't think the second chapter is crappy. It takes a lot of courage to let other people read your work.. keep going!
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Reviewed By: Buddha says update!!! [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this a lot so far. It's really cute! Please update soon!!!
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Title: Update!
Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr On: March 01, 2006 19:06 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this story so far. I always wondered about what could become of Kazuma and Kanami if they were both adults. I like your mindset of Kazuma and think you should definitely continue to write this story. Keep up the awesome work!
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Title: Update soon!!!!
Reviewed By: Moonlite On: February 28, 2006 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good!!! I gave you tens in everything, but Enjoyment Factor. I really wanted to see more of the couples also in the first chapter. But I shouldn't have given my hopes up right??? well email me at Muffun@bellsouth.net when you update. Well Good Luck and God Bless.
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