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| "Be Careful What You Wish For..." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Keetra On: December 28, 2007 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm hoping 10 means the highest. It does not say, lol. I loved this story immensely! You're a very talented author and I am so happy to have found another author that writes CCS so well! Yipee!! They're hard to find nowadays. >.> Lovely idea, if a touch sad as well. Poor Tomoyo! We knew her love was not to be, but still.... I can't help but feel sad for her. I especially loved the inevitable meeting of Nadeshico and Fujitaka at the end. Hanyaaaaaaaa! Little confusing with all the time jumps but not so confusing that you get too lost. And unlike other fics i've read with lots of jumps, your did not feel rushed. Yay! And I'm babbling yet again. xP Great story! *goes to view moe goodies you've written*
| Title: roxors
Reviewed By: feifiefofum [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'd give you a 9.9 if i could, but eh. love your ficcies (and your not so ficcy fics). i'm always amazed at how well thought out your stories always are. if your not careful, you may unleash a jealous psycho who could never reach your heights and become completely obsessed with you and your writings. that's just a thought... really. ah, loveliness. i do hope you'll continue your other fics too. oh, and if you're wondering about the eight, it's because there are some words missing here and there. forgetting a to, here and and there. heh. i had to express my jealousy somehow. it's not healthy to hold all in after all.
| Reviewed By: Cardcaptor_RLH85 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your stories in general but this was a wonderful one-shot! I really like the way that you were able to tie up everything so well at the end with Nadeshiko and Terada ^_^
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