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| "Just Before Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Eivets On: April 10, 2006 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. . .wow, definitely in love with the content of your story. Your writing is passably good, and I appreciated your attempts at complex and unique language. Better use of punctuation and less abrupt perspective shifting would have made this story ideal, but like I said the content was prime stuff. Left me misty-eyed, and I'm not a misty-eyed individual.
| Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: change_of_heart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for writing such a great fanfic that has friendship, not yaoi. This was really, really cute and put a huge smile on my face
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