Title: Nice
Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr On: March 01, 2006 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story is very good but as you said in the last chapter I think the ending was a little lacking. I really hoped Kagome and Inuyasha would remember it all, not it be some kind of a dream! I didn't like that too much but I really like the part where you had Love kiss Death, I thought that was great! This is a very well written story and the only bad thing I have to say (I do not mean this in a bad way) is the ending could use a little revising. PLEASE revise it! Your story is great and I compliment you on everything about it except the ending. (Keep the Death and Love together thing though). Overall your story rocks and I would hate to see it end here. A sequel would be nice. Or maybe just an epilogue that tells us a little about what might happen. (Hint Hint. A certain blue haired little girl.) Keep up the good work!
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