| "Ranma's portal pokegirl adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: avatoa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 03:52 CST
Comment/Review:
It's been nearly a year since you have updated this thing. What the heck is going on?
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 20:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting idea, and I can't really fault you on wanting tons of hot girls. But I think I have to agree some with the other reviewers, you have a few to many girls just droping out of no where. I think this story would of improved greatly if you took the time to write out a few chapters of Ranma's exploits in the pokegirl world. Like more details of how he grew up with some them, how he fought them etc. First few weeks or what ever there would have to be interesting, considering Ranma was raised to think girls were weak and worthless.. and I bet most the pokegirls there could beat a young Ranma easily.
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Title: This is Funny
Reviewed By: DrewB1442 On: April 24, 2006 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are few Pokegirl stories that make me laugh so hard. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 00:48 CST
Comment/Review:
It's got potential. I'm not a fan of Pokegirl unless it's based off what Metroanime started. Hopefully you decided to continue this. I do think you've given ranma way to many pokegirls though. Keeping track of all of them will be next to impossilbe and giveing them time to work in some characterization could prove problematic. Good luck.
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Title: This is FUNny
Reviewed By: dana_san [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Generally, I do not read any fics that mix beast and human but frankly - this is really funny! I am actually looking forward to the Amazons interacting with the powerful pokegirls - if you keep it funny, I will definitely continue reading!
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Title: AWaC
Reviewed By: Waruiko On: March 05, 2006 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Better than mainstream crap that people spam, but untill I see where you are going with this I withhold my right to give final judgement on total quality.
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Reviewed By: beanking On: March 04, 2006 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally something comes close to finishing what metromaine stated. Now he's back in his world with company,...
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