| "The Fallen Labyrinth" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Anij On: March 18, 2006 18:34 CST
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Ana makes a pretty good Queen. Much more entertaining than Jareth appeared to be. getting exciting... - waiting for the next update...
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Reviewed By: Anij On: March 18, 2006 18:34 CST
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okay...i'm confused. Is Jin son of Jareth or no? In ch 3 he says - "That boy's brother should have been my son!" - I assumed "brother" means Jin. In ch 4 he says - "His son. His heir." Unless this is one of those riddles and I've gotten it all backwards. Or... It's gonna be explained later.
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Reviewed By: -_-! On: March 18, 2006 18:33 CST
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I thought I would leave a review.. trust me I know how it feels to only have one review. Ok, honestly.. I have not read your story entirely, and I think I know why noone leaves reviews for poor people like us. They don't like change. They want the same storyline with the same characters and the same ending, they're afraid of anything different.. very annoying. But your story looks very involved, well thought out and very, very detailed. Good luck.
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Reviewed By: Bunny Aino On: March 18, 2006 18:32 CST
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So I just finished reading your story, and wow.. I can't believe you haven't gotten any reviews. This is very well written and again, very well thought out. Please do continue! *shameless self-promo insert here*: If you would like to read mine, please feel free to do so =)
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