| "It Didn't Have To Happen" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Kandy: the author On: July 02, 2002 10:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry it's been so long, it's just, I had no access to the Internet for like a whole month plus. I'm at the library. Any who, I wrote the next chapter, and I hope to have it posted by this month. July Sorry you guys, and thanks for the reviews!! |
Reviewed By: Eathlinn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2002 02:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. |
Reviewed By: Rommy On: March 31, 2002 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hope Trunks is gonna make it. As far as 18 goes I hope they succeed in taking her away from that saiyan bastard. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2002 22:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmm, i like the story, thought the chappy's are pretty short, can't wait for the next one though! |
Reviewed By: Joey On: March 23, 2002 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! It is really really good. plese hurry and write more. |
Reviewed By: Rommy On: March 23, 2002 10:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good chapters, a little short but still good. I wonder if the Z fighters are waiting for Trunks get some strength back. Update soon, I wanna see what Vegeta has comin to him. |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2002 22:43 CST
Comment/Review:
OMK!!!! Thats a differnt side of Vegeta. Geez i feal sorry for all the Veggie lovers. Even more so for the #18 fans. Kami...PLZ up more.
want to know what the Basterd side of Veggie does next,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: ********** On: March 14, 2002 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope she makes good next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Rommy On: March 14, 2002 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, what a cold blooded bastard Vegeta has turned out to be. He never wanted Trunks and he believes Bulma tricked him. Asshole. At least Trunks disowned him. That must have hurt monkey boy's pride. Vegeta has to pay for all the pain he has cause. Go get'im!!! |
Reviewed By: Rommy On: March 13, 2002 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it seems to me that monkey boy is nothing but a worthless, vindictive, low level piece of trash for what he's done. Since he doesn't care much for or respect women, I think Bulma should kick his ass out and Trunks should disown him. He has to pay in some way for what he did and I have a feeling that he's not thru yet. Write more. |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2002 20:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah No! Now What's gonna happen?????? |
Reviewed By: angelryodo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2002 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hope she makes it out alive.very good story i like it. |
Reviewed By: ********** On: March 13, 2002 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it!! |
