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| "Unknown Sacrifice" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Adnexus On: December 03, 2006 19:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Sure Ilike, I fallowed you from Fanfiction to here :D If you don´t mind me asking why did you´re dad not like Fanfiction??
| Reviewed By: Misa92 On: November 23, 2006 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its interesting... i hope you'll update this, i'd like to see more.
| Reviewed By: Chrosis On: November 17, 2006 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I followed you over from fanfiction. net I'm liking the story so far, but what's keeping Scar from just blowing a hole in the wall and leaving? It's not like any prison could hold him unless the restricted the use of his right arm.
| Reviewed By: FlyingFree [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 06:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I like this so far, it's very interesting. I liked that part with armstrong about his 'rescuing being passed down through the generations', it made me laugh. Oh poor Ed, getting stabbed and all, I don't know if it'd be all that fun. Well keep it up, it's a good story and thanks for reviewing mine, thought i'd return the favour.
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