| "Through Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 19:53 CDT
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this fic rox!! u really need 2 update it tho. it is a lil hard 2 read w/ all the writing all 2gether but i still read it. any ways, plz update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinu 13th Sage Sage of Pain(not logged in-_-) On: July 07, 2006 17:57 CDT
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I like your story. I've read it. It's one of my faves... but... You ought to write more. I think you could really do some amazing stuff. And I don't really care what you write about. I just think that you need to write more. I think that you could go far with your writing. You have a very distinctive style. It takes a bit to understand it, but it's good. I like it. You ought to continue it. I really, REALLY like this story.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 16:24 CDT
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Wow... you really need to sort out your paragraphs o__o its totatally a headach to read.
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Title: would read but...
Reviewed By: Shinigami_chylde [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 21:29 CDT
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Okay this looks like a good fic BUT I can not read it because you have every paragraph, sentance and anything else bunched into one, i find it really hard to read ^^ If oy space it out properly then i ould love to read it
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