| "When I Come Home" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Mel Meiko Mei Ling [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. I really like how you described Seto's urge and desire to see the ones that cared about him the most. Your detail is remarkable and very well done. My FAVORITE parts is near the end with the exchanged words of love and devotion; especially the only god part. I so felt those. It was amazing. And the description of Yami and his actions in bed, I felt like I could really see his tears and him combating the pain for the sake of showing his love for Seto. Oh, and I'm also a Seto x Yami writer. But I haven't really posted any online (just a partial Seto x Atem). But I'm in the process of writing one.
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Title: Hehehe
Reviewed By: TLOTFA On: June 17, 2006 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heheheh speeled my name wrong. It's not Leadet it's leader!
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: (TheLeadetOfTheFallenAngels) TLOTFA On: June 17, 2006 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It's so orginal. I see it is posted on AFF.net too. That is where I first saw this story. Excellent keep it up.
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