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| "Code Lyoko E56: Frozen Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Garfie2000 On: May 08, 2006 22:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Again you are doing something a little to much, the cutting off of bad words. Also, I worked at a place with a walk in freezer and well, they are cooooold, but you could last a good hour or two before it would be to much.
| Reviewed By: Famouf Amof On: March 06, 2006 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like that, how you start a word but cut if off, but you do it to much. I can see Odd using those words, and maybe Yumi or Ulrich when mad, but not Jeremie or Aelita. Well, maybe Aelita, if she heard it on TV and went to use it. Also, what is with SIssi? I know she can be mean but to say that? That is out of character, maybe. This is your work but still, she has proven she can be nice, and she does want to be part of the Lyoko Gang, so I think calling Yumi a Chink would just push the others away. Still a good story, and until season 3 comes out as good as it gets, lol.
| Title: Awww
Reviewed By: DevinS On: March 03, 2006 14:21 CST
Comment/Review:
They were so close! Just like the show, I don't know if I like that or not, yes this is based off the show but it is so like it, are you a writer for it or something? Using ideas they didn't like and putting them up here? Only they could string us fans along like that, lol. Can't wait for next one! ALso, why do you cut them off so much? I'm getting that you don't want them to use bad words, so when one does go to use one they get cut off somehow, laser, phone call, so forth. Aren't they supposed to be uh, 14 for everyone but Yumi who is 15? And isn't France liberal and all that, I get this is a kids show, but they are older, and in a country that is supposed to be liberal, so whats up with no bad words? I don't know, I just hope the next one is as great as the past few were!
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