| "Worth Waiting For" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 09:03 CDT
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Wow! I really love this story. Matter of fact, this is my second time reading it all the way through. I'm so dissappointed that you only have 10 reviews. That's such a shame for a really good piece of work.
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Title: Congratulations!!!!
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 03:51 CDT
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Your story has won First Place for Best Romance Fiction (InuYasha/Kagome) from the Feudal Association. Your award can be found here - http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/april2006awards/Best_InuKag_Roma nce_Fic_1st.jpg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
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Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: tootalltygerlily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 01:48 CDT
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Congratulations, your story has been nominated for "Best Romance Fiction (Inuyasha/Kagome)" at the Feudal Association. Voting will be held through May 1st, 2006 and winners will be notified shortly thereafter. Feel free to join our group and/or help us spread the word about our group! The official website for the group - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The yahoo group where nomination/voting takes place - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ If you have any questions, feel free to email Dark Avenger (the owner) at inuyashasbytch@gmail.com
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 05:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job! Thanks for a completed story with some interesting ideas. I wish that Miroku and Sango would have played a larger role in things, often I felt as if they were just background. Miroku in particular could have added a little angst/conflict since he would have had no way of knowing if the Kazana would swallow him or not before Naraku got around to showing up so waiting for a year must have been hard for him. I like what you did with Shippou, too often people use him for comic relief or ignore him instead of making use of his relationship with Kagome. The transitions from one scene to the next need to be set apart somehow. A few lines of blank space or a line of dashes would work. It can be jolting when there is a change of scene, time, and POV from one paragraph to the next without some signal that it's coming. Kouga was done really well, you avoided the cliche of having him and Inuyasha get into a bloody fight over Kagome while showing how it hurt him to lose her.
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
encore encore!!!!!! write a sequel to this and that would be awsome!!!!~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading this, this was freaking awesome... i loved this story so much... i hope to read more of your fics at some point too, i'll see what i like, and review when i find it. Thank you for this wonderful fic, thank you.
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yes, i knew this story was great... but now, that i've finally gone over the point where i left off since those AFF problems, i can honestly say this story is awesome! Looking forward for more!
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Title: Please continue!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 08:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, Rin just got an eyeful, didn't she? I can't wait for Sesshomaru to show back up to collect her. This story is very well written and enjoyable. I don't know why you don't have more reviews than you do. I'm really enjoying this fic and look forward to each new chapter.
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Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS.........please please PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this story very much, so much i've added you to my favourite authors list. I've once began reading this fic on AFF, but due to those problems it now has, i haven't been able to read more nor review it... shame really. I hope to finish it here, and i hope you'll post the rest of the chapters soon too, this is a REALLY good story.
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying your story. Mama is one smart cookie, isn't she? Making them see what they couldn't see themselves by keeping them apart. The lemon scenes were great - hot and steamy. And the scene between the couple and Kouga was well done also. Your fic is well-written and thought out and I hope there is more to come.
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