"Loss and Power" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: loss and power Reviewed By: Jadeflowerboooks On: March 05, 2007 20:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hello again. I can't wait to find out what has happened to Gohan. I hope you keep on writing. I may be a while before I review again. Only allowed on the computer once a week, for fun. Please keep up the good plot. Who else is going to be brought back to life, friend or foe? Thanks.
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Title: lose and power Reviewed By: jadeflowerbooks On: March 05, 2007 13:58 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like the story. I loved that it flowed so smoothly and was easy to follow and read. I like how the story plot is going. There are enough discription without overwheling the reader. Is the fighter in the wifebeater and black pants Gohan? Please keep on writing. Update soon. Thanks.
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Title: Hurray A Good Gohan FIC Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 01:20 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OOHHH I found another good DBZ Fic Hurray!! i've been lookin for a good gohan fic that doesnt make him look to much like a nerd like in the show and i'v only found a few and they never update so i'm glad i found another and i hope u keep goin with this fic cause i would like to kno what will happen next so keep up the good work and i'll be wait 4 an update so Later!!!!
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