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| "Farewell, Lord Sesshomaru" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: GWolf
Reviewed By: GWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 10:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. Finally, I see someone do a proper take on Sessh and Rin, and gets his personality down
| Reviewed By: Cyndi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 00:43 CST
Comment/Review:
This put a tight, burning, hot, aching knot in my throat and chest. The last line brought on the tears. Parting is such sweet sorrow. You nailed Sesshoumaru's character so perfectly. Makes you wonder if he cared at all that she was leaving.
| Reviewed By: Myztik Shadow Inu (nli) On: March 03, 2006 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow ... I've almost been withered to tears, but I shall hold it in until I've finished writing this. Another absolutely amazing job on this, no question, you really did deserve to win first place in that fanfic guild contest, which you most plausibly took single-handedly. Very, very, very well done! I loved how Sesshomaru wished only that Rin not forget him; so touching; and the fact that he wished not to "meddle in her affairs", how unselfish and honorable ... the great Lord Sesshomaru wittled down to this, a state of caring for humans and love; I loved it! I'm always amazed whenever I read one of your pieces; keep it up!!!! You are an absolutely awesome writer, I envy your ability/talent. Keep up the amazing work!!!! ~Clarissa Ann Mirko
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