| "Naruto: Zero Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: WhitePhoenix8391 On: June 13, 2006 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is awesome keep it up. Can't wait for it to be finished. But good job update soon!
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Reviewed By: Heartless Ruler On: May 22, 2006 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awsome . I love the way you wrote it . I made my own fan fic . But it's not as good as yours . It's about a boy named Takashi . Anway please update soon !
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Reviewed By: bananagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 18:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Hm ... I like this chapter much better, I think. I also think you need to work on your paragraphing - Usually after a person speaks there is a new paragraph. Other than that, it was pretty good. I'm looking forward to your next update. ~ Banana Gurl
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Reviewed By: Zetsuke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 20:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Geez, you don't like Ino very much, do you? Anyways, this sounds like a good story, just try to break your chapters into more reasonable lengths.
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Reviewed By: bananagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 14:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good so far, although you could've broken Chapter 1 into about 3 chapters or so. Keep it up, though, and I'll be looking forward to your next update.
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