"Matrix evolution" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: good Reviewed By: HaXx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 03:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Althouhg I don't thi nk anyone should rate a fic based on what the yhave seen, you should reveiw good ifcvs like this without predjudice. And i gave you a mark for Rika's pimp outfit, very original ..
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Reviewed By: LostDragon On: March 20, 2002 00:02 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: The reason I rated It 7 is not because it was a bad fic. But quit the oppiset; Iv read an unlimited # of NC17 digimon fic's by now, and this just seems like another walk in the park for me. but I really really have to give you some credit on how well you presented the story its self. Iv been having to getting use to some really lousy stories latly.
My only complaint is that I dont think that the lemon scene was that explicet.
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