| "Into a corner" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: shisouikari@gmail.com
Reviewed By: Rixii On: December 02, 2006 15:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Indeed, the spelling and word choice has again improved dramatically; with each installment I am coming to love your stories more. One thing I would suggest is making your chapters longer, though, seeing as you uploaded them within a few days (not to mention that it's already finished by the time I found it) it's not a major concern. Also, Dojima and Haruto were noticably missing until the final chapters. No complaints about the characters personalities.
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Reviewed By: ADarkNightsObsession (Portia) On: October 17, 2006 09:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahhh! There is a sequal already! *does dance* Screw sleep! Must REAAAAAAAAAAAD! Muahaha. You are so amazing you deprive me of sleep and food.
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Reviewed By: sasquatch On: April 16, 2006 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gooooooo i love the way you write please please i would love a sequel i really want to know what kind of powers their child will have if he gets them at all and i wanna see some more passionate love between robin and amon maybe nagira could find love as well ^_^ just a thought lol but honestly you are my most favourite author right now on mediaminer the way you write the love scenes it is amazing please i would love to see a sequel to everything you write dont ever stop writing because i would not knwo what to do if there were no more withch hunter robin fanfics from you anyhooo ill stop now lol keep on trucking muc love [?[K.*.r.*.i.*.s.*.s.*.y]?]
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Title: Into A Corner
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 02:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: Into A Corner
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Reviewed By: the foam On: March 05, 2006 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write a sequal! please! I beg! I need a sequal!
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