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| "The Mists of the Sacred Forest" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Its coming along
Reviewed By: Whitey5944 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good! I'm enjoying this story immensely ever since you started writing. Especially chapter 6, I just like how you're still in the early development of Kagome and InuYasha's relationship.....when they still weren't sure about each other. Just one question, how far are you into the series? Cuz it seems like your still fairly new, thats all. Anyway, keep up the good work and don't forget to check out my new chapter!
| Title: Coming along
Reviewed By: Whitey5944 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're story is coming along, I can't wait to see where you take it next week. The only problem is see is with spelling Sango's name. It's Sango, not Songo. Just glad to help.
| Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i like where u are going with this story but it's only two chapters long so far ..... please post again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: Whitey5944 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, it's me. Just thought I'd drop in and read your fic. It seems good and has some potential. Since its just the first chapter, I really have nothing to go on, but it seems good. Update soon, and don't forget to read my fic ;)
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