| "Code Lyoko E58: Choose Your Fate!" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Choose Your Fate
Reviewed By: Angel39114 On: December 28, 2010 14:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i loved it when william did that to yumi i was like OMG?!?! but im glad that yumi and ulrich are finelly together i cant stop reading your stories it would be a whole lot better if they put this on tv |
Reviewed By: kateblah On: July 12, 2007 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was interesting to read
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Reviewed By: LiNz_kawaii On: October 28, 2006 17:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
I though that was pretty cool...code lyoko is hard to write fanfics for and this was pretty good!
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Reviewed By: Famouf AMof On: May 20, 2006 16:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You fixed the spelling errors, about time. Yumi Ishi GAWA??!!?? That and a few others, but you made it more adultish while changing things, hate to see what Yumi and WIlliam do the next time you update this. A much better story!
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Reviewed By: Garfie2000 On: May 08, 2006 23:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
ABout time Ulrich stopped being such a wuss. Well written, and rather adultish, as you put it. But well written, not smutty, very mature how you did it.
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Reviewed By: Famouf Amof On: March 06, 2006 15:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Could have been written better, and the stuff with Yumi and William, ugh, not right. But that's my personal take on it, not that this story wasn't good, I just didn't like that part. Waiting for next one, love this show, and heard they are making an OVA soon, can't wait to see it.
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Reviewed By: DevinS On: March 05, 2006 21:37 EST
Comment/Review:
YEA!!!!!! Aw this is so cute, and so cool! Thank you for writing that, about freaking time! Poor WIlliam though, he is ok, but Yumi and Ulrich were meant to be! Yumi and Ulrich forever!
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