Title: SpEeChLeSs
Reviewed By: XOMagickMoonOX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My title says it all. I am speechless (though I'm really about to prove otherwise...) This story was so abso-fucking-lutely fantastic!!!! I loved it! I love your characters (Yatima especially.... he just sounds so adorable yet awesome--a cocky bastard, I believe is how you put it, and those are my favorite kinds of characters). Hmmm... What's Azathoth? I'm assuming it's the place where Yamita is from, but I guess I'll just have to wait and find out. Oh, and did I mention that you write one hell of a beautiful lemon??? That was amazing!! It's the sort of beauty I can ever only DREAM of capturing in my writing. I aspire to write as good as this one day. And the originality and creativity was great; the ending scene was gorgeous, with the whole romantic sunset. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. ^^ Hm, the only thing I didn't really like about the characters was Alika's beard. o.o For me yaoi and facial hair don't mix; but that's just me. He sounded gorgeous otherwise, what with the long black hair and supposedly nice body. So, this whole thing took place in Alika's mind, but it wasn't a dream?? o.o I wonder how that works. If you update, will we find out?? Will there be more delicious yaoi-ness in chapters to come--ARE there chapters to come??! I would assume so, since this is a "work in progress" (or so it's labeled) so the hope of more chapters looks promising. That said, this story is amazing, I am in love with it, and I hope you update ASAP!!!!
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