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Reviewed By: 4DDR4 On: March 12, 2008 19:43 CDT
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i havnt finished reading yet so ill hold off on the scoring till i do. so far i say this is excelent just like many of your other works! the only thing i have a slight problem with is the format in which you write. It's slightly hard to read as it is and i would like to sugest the MLA format for the use of your next work. other than that im really enjoying your story!
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Title: raunhier than the other one!
Reviewed By: denisud On: July 17, 2006 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually enjoyed the last two chapters more than the first 7. But I could see where this was going. Good using Mullin as comic relief but I didn't like Lavie being the sensei to his sexual antics. Coulda Waka from the bridge crew instead, buts thats My opinion, so don't count it too strongly. Liked all your stories so far mainly cause they are stories with 'adult' themes and not the other way around which is done way too much here! Can't wait for your next one! dennisud
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Title: Perfect End to an Excellent story
Reviewed By: AXMODEFRED [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The end was exactly what I hoped tt to be. I look foward to your next story.
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Title: Perfect End to an Excellent story
Reviewed By: AXMODEFRED [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The end was exactly what I hoped tt to be. I look foward to your next story.
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Title: Wonderful as usual ^_^
Reviewed By: Cardcaptor_RLH85 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love what you've done with the Last Exile universe with your stories. Even though you said that this story was made from what you left out of 'Developing Bonds' I believe that this stroy was even better than that one. You managed to write lemon scenes that actually sounded realistic. That's something that is quite rare in anime fanfiction. Well done ^_^
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Reviewed By: nonengel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 23:05 CDT
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you've done a nice job with the adaptation of the series. You portrayal of that characters and the emotions have been great and your pacing is pretty solid. Good story
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Reviewed By: micwick On: May 11, 2006 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY! a lemon thats not written by a 14 year old virgin! this has to be one of the best fan fics i've ever read and definitly in my top 5, keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: AXMODEFRED [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent update. I look forward to seeing how the relationships progress. I hope that everyone ends happy and togethr at the end of this awesome tale.
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Reviewed By: ChibiAlistia On: April 24, 2006 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has got to be one of the best I've read in awhile and even better its Last Exile, my favorite anime. I usually just stick to shonen/shoujo ai fanfiction (Alistia/Tatiana is my OTP ^^) so I was a bit hesitant about reading this at first because of the whole Claus/harem thing. But since it's hard to find any Last Exile fanfiction I decided to give it a try even if it was just going pointless smut. I have to say I was clearly surprised upon reading it, instead of finding pointless smut I found a well thought out story that gave you a real feel for the characters and their actions. Giving a little back story for the characters was a nice touch and the sex scenes were nicely done. ^_^ While some scenes did seem a bit rushed around the beginning they weren't really out of place, though I felt like I missed something between the end of chapter three and halfway through chapter four. All in all I definitely plan to continue reading this so I can't wait till your next update!
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Reviewed By: A A On: March 25, 2006 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter in anther awesome story.
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