| "Fingering Moonbeams" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: flamingfiredog On: December 26, 2009 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO!!!! dont tell me its over soo soon and it was just getting good to...welll anyways i give u 4 thumbs up this story was awesum!!! absolutly loved it LUV YAH :P
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Reviewed By: vampirebride kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 18:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it update soon
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Title: Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
≤≤≤Please≤≤≤ Update soon I loved it all!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: winter's mistres On: January 02, 2008 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it and i hope you don't leave it a cliff hanger? I like the story line a lot really creative!!!!!!!!
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 04:57 CST
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I really like this story so far. I hope you haven't abandoned it. Because while this concept is by no means original and there are the occasional spelling/grammar mistakes, you're a really good writer. I usually hate original characters, but Raven fits so well into the story. She doesn't make the story seem strained or forced. That's definitely an accomplishment (few authors can do that). In any case, I hope you haven't been hit with too severe a case of writer's block. I'm definitely adding this to my fav list. Looking forward to an update (on any of your stories)... ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 04:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
--FOR SOME REASON MY REVIEW WAS CUT OFF ONLY SHOWING THE LAST PART--
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 04:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
< It's a pet peeve of mine, and I know everyone does it, but please don't American-ize the Romanji. There's no 's' at the end of ANY Japanese word to show pluralism (i.e. it's 'youkai' not 'youkais' and 'miko', not 'mikos'). Thanks.
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Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 06:42 CDT
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this is just brilliant! cant wait for the next chapter. ~clusterlizard1
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapters. Update again soon. Can't wait to read who the rat is and if Sesshomaru can become himself again.
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Reviewed By: sweetness92490 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! IT IS SOOO GOOD!!! PLEASE UP DATE!!
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Reviewed By: Aubrey's girl On: March 27, 2007 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! absolutly love it!... I'm sorry for your roommate as well... well anyway cant wait for the next chapter... best of wishes, Aubrey's girl
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm glad things have improved and I'm grateful that you've updated. Please do it again soon!
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ano... I don't really think you got the story down perfectly, still that is the thing about fanfiction. People interpret different things differently. I only read half-way through chapter six though I intend to finish this story sometime. Anyway, don't you think Kagome would've been far more frightened of Sesshoumaru? Or Sesshoumaru far more possessive and... I don't know how to say this, but... cruel? I mean, not only harsh with Kagome, but I don't think after centuries of no blood he'd just be like "oh, ok let this person live la-te-da." or anything like that, I'm sure that under those circumstances whoever he fed off of would be completely and wholly dead. Still, you did a pretty good job with this fanfiction and I'll read the rest when I'm awake. ^-^
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Reviewed By: tinksmom20 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 10:17 CDT
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I understand how she feels, I have had two miscarriages in a row and I am pregnant again and hoping that everything goes right with this one. I'll keep her in my prayers.
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Reviewed By: cutiekitty On: March 14, 2007 05:35 CDT
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I've been enjoying your story and I hope that you continue it, please give my greivences to your roomie and I hope that you both get through your loss. untill then I will be looking for your stories and hopeing you guys are holding up!
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