| "Fingering Moonbeams" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 04:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
--FOR SOME REASON MY REVIEW WAS CUT OFF ONLY SHOWING THE LAST PART--
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 04:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
< It's a pet peeve of mine, and I know everyone does it, but please don't American-ize the Romanji. There's no 's' at the end of ANY Japanese word to show pluralism (i.e. it's 'youkai' not 'youkais' and 'miko', not 'mikos'). Thanks.
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Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 06:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is just brilliant! cant wait for the next chapter. ~clusterlizard1
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapters. Update again soon. Can't wait to read who the rat is and if Sesshomaru can become himself again.
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Reviewed By: sweetness92490 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! IT IS SOOO GOOD!!! PLEASE UP DATE!!
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Reviewed By: Aubrey's girl On: March 27, 2007 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! absolutly love it!... I'm sorry for your roommate as well... well anyway cant wait for the next chapter... best of wishes, Aubrey's girl
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm glad things have improved and I'm grateful that you've updated. Please do it again soon!
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ano... I don't really think you got the story down perfectly, still that is the thing about fanfiction. People interpret different things differently. I only read half-way through chapter six though I intend to finish this story sometime. Anyway, don't you think Kagome would've been far more frightened of Sesshoumaru? Or Sesshoumaru far more possessive and... I don't know how to say this, but... cruel? I mean, not only harsh with Kagome, but I don't think after centuries of no blood he'd just be like "oh, ok let this person live la-te-da." or anything like that, I'm sure that under those circumstances whoever he fed off of would be completely and wholly dead. Still, you did a pretty good job with this fanfiction and I'll read the rest when I'm awake. ^-^
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Reviewed By: tinksmom20 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 10:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
I understand how she feels, I have had two miscarriages in a row and I am pregnant again and hoping that everything goes right with this one. I'll keep her in my prayers.
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Reviewed By: cutiekitty On: March 14, 2007 05:35 CDT
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I've been enjoying your story and I hope that you continue it, please give my greivences to your roomie and I hope that you both get through your loss. untill then I will be looking for your stories and hopeing you guys are holding up!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 21:34 CST
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support your friend, but don't forget to take care of yourself to. know when to get help if you need it
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Reviewed By: black flame kitt [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is me from FF.net that is so sad about your roommate do you know why she misscaried? i'm just curious. anyway i love this story too so i hope you will update soon. lots a love to you and your roomate
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Reviewed By: AngelGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry 4 you and your friends lost. I understand that this is a hard time for u right now soooo I'm not expecting and updates anytime soon. I hope that u would eventually continue this story since its one of my favorites but I understand the need to make a friend better is much more important than a story. So I hope that ur friend gets better soon and the eventual update of this story. Good luck and god bless.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 18:58 CST
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I hope that your room mate recovers well. Losing a child leaves a very empty place inside. Perhaps you could find something for her to become involved with that will help her to cope with her grief. Give her my condolences. My thoughts are with you both. Snowfall
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 18:03 CST
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I pray for the both of you and hope everything goes well.
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