Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: March 06, 2006 20:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. Great story, dear! Where to begin... Ryou crying and upset in the very first sentence of the story! Poor baby! I was sort of angry at Ryou for not being really, REALLY pissed off at Bakura... slap him, damn it! Have a backbone, Ryou! HE LIED TO YOU, BABY! He cheated on you! He came home to you after having sex with the Ishtar's and had you finish him off as a freakin' nightcap! Vile bastard! OK... I will backoff a bit! I love your writing style and the very descriptive way you make your story pop and stand out. I am not much of a Seto/Jou fan but that chapter mainly devoted to them was nice. I like how you have depicted Seto. I really like your characterizations of Marik and Malik! Pretty. I like that nickname... and KuraKura... Your story has many a twist within it and I will be interested to see how you take this since pairs are being mixed up but there are definite rumblings already set in place that those couples (or threesomes) aren't as stable and as fulfilling as the ones involved would like the relationships to be. Ryou is still heartbreaking... I found it interesting that Bakura isn't liking the fact that Ryou will be going out with someone else but boy, was he able to shut that thought down in a hurry when confronted with freakin' hot sex with the Ishtars! Man... hot chapter, babe! I ESPECIALLY liked the part with Bakura in the cold shower... I think that was when it was revealed how much of a shit he was truly being to Ryou... Ah, the Ishtars haven't said they love him... pity party for Bakura... Not! So much going on and so much to look forward to in upcoming chapters! Oh, and by the way, Bakura may be a shit but I like how you have him portrayed... yummy! More, more, more!
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