Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nsi On: April 10, 2006 01:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
My. That was twisted. 0.o Very interesting, however, If he loves him, why does he hurt him? Mari is the equivilent of a child, in his mind at least, So why did Yami act like that? Sure, Mari was misbehaving, and no-one like's to be chewed on (less it be heat of the moment?) But if He truely loved him, why would he even threaten to leave him Alone again? Maybe it's best if Yami never has kids. -.-; Why do you write relationships like this? It'a a reoccurring theme in most of your fics. Why make things more difficult? Of Course, I am a little bias. I'm a "and they lived(mostly)Happily Ever After..." Kind of person. Well, keep writting!
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