| "The love beyond time" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: inuyashas big fan On: July 15, 2006 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats a cliffie u gotta rite again kk??????plzz ur a good writer plzzzwrit again
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Reviewed By: inukaggyobsessor On: July 08, 2006 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok heres how i feel. kill off kikyo and koga and naraku, and put more sweet inukag moments. end it asap...................................................
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh i love the story but you must update soon for i want to hear what happens next!!!!!!!
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Title: Your Story
Reviewed By: MistikAmanda On: March 07, 2006 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is pretty good. I like the part where Inuyasha & Kagome blush because they are questioned by the others as to their whereabouts. The only things I would watch would your spelling & grammer. That and the very beginning of your first chapter sounds a whole lot like the way "Castle beyond the looking Glass" starts out with Inuyasha & Kagome in the photo booth. Keep writing! It's good!
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Reviewed By: kandi--CAI On: March 07, 2006 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reading your first chapter was like slipping into an old, familiar pair of my favorite jeans. It seems that I have heard this story elsewere, but I am not unhappy about it...IT is like a new song with a familiar melody. I am immediately drawn into the story... The grammar and puncuation need a little work. Be careful when mixing Japanese and English phrases...you have to remember that the Japanese language doesn't have the same structure as English. Hojo is a bit OCC (he always seemed too shy to go about proclaiming his love, lol) but, in an enjoyable way. Please, keep up the good work, as I am enjoying your fanfic thus far!
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Reviewed By: Miko Hanyou Anna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty original. I understand that this is your first time so you should improve your skills with experience. Don't be dicouraged by the critics, just continue with your work.
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