| "A Mother Miko's Instincts" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Title: BEGGING
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: May 04, 2006 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOO LONG FOR THE STORY TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GONNA CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!LEASE!!!PLEASE!!! and...Oh. My. God. So good. So good. I can't even describe the elation I felt when I got the notice that this had been updated, and then the even greater elation after reading this chapter. I wish I had some criticism... they might be moving a little too quickly, but somehow that works. Can't wait till next update! and...wow... I really like your story.. I just read the chapter u posed. AHHHH YOU JUST LEFT IT THERE!!??? *sobs uncontrollably* Mother F&*%er! (not you.. just a comment) INUYASHA AND SESSHY ARE SO DAMN SEXY IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY!!!! I want them for my birthday! (or at least another chapter) My b- day is May 5th :-D just thought i'd tell you that(*hint hint**wink wink*. And wow.. I wish I was living this story or something.. THEY'RE SO HOT! sorry...I'm better now.. ok I'm gonna go before I start drooling all over my keyboard. Please add more chapters! Lemony even! :-D ok bye Also I usually don't ask writers to hurry up and updte because I beleive it is very rude. But this one time I will be rude. PLEASE update faseer than a month. I don't think I can what that long. Another great chapter by the way.^_^
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 01:05 CDT
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YOU Rockman!!!!!! your story is awsome and i can't wait to see how your next chapter is!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: alleycat6189 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 23:48 CDT
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I hope that Shippou starts to get the hots for her that would be great! and with your kiss A** scenes it would ROCK!!!!
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Reviewed By: KiraMai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG You are a genius!!! You have made me very happy by writing this story the floating ass part is the greatest too :-) keep writing it! I do need a little help with my story too so maybe you could help me?
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Reviewed By: JDLover90 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just finished reading the first fanfic, and I liked it a lot... it was too funny. so i decided to read this one also and am laughing so much... so whats gonna happen with Shippo??? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 03:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha, Kanna and Shippou? XD Well, why not? I wonder what Shippou thinks of her... And I wonder where he's been. Update again soon! :D
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Reviewed By: Nony-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 20:25 CDT
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I just love your work, and I don't think I can ever look at Jaken the same way agian *mental gag*
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Reviewed By: alleycat6189 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 16:50 CDT
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HAHAH!! Kanna X Shippou! LOL this is great! YEAH! can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: alleycat6189 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 16:50 CDT
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HAHAH!! Kanna X Shippou! LOL this is great! YEAH! can't wait for more
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Title: HAHAHA!
Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 12:46 CDT
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I've been following this story ever since the original and I think it is the funniest fricken thing I've ever read! I'm still laughing about the flammable fart!! That was freaking genius! I commend you for continuing such a great story and hope you update soon!
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Title: Ch 12
Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't laugh as hard in this chapter as the others, but this one seemed more like an in-between chapter anyway. It's funny that I didn't think about that before; a fart is flammable gas, set it on fire! XD It's cool that Kanna will be involved in this story aswell. Who'd thought she'd be a pervert? :D
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Title: Is Still Laughing.....
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this SO much. I don't know how you do, but keep it up! And 'Who'd have thunk it'? Lmao, well, she learned from the best, ne? Lol. Great chapter, update when you can.
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 19:08 CDT
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Ack! Gross little kid !!!!!!!!!! Perverted! If Kanna's to busy watching Inyasha and Kagome have sex then Kagura will be able to find her. GRRRRRRRRROOSSSSSSSSSSS KIIIIIIIDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Still the funniest!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know how you keep coming up with this stuff. It's just too funny! I look forward to your next chapter!
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Title: Mooooore!
Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I like that you update so fast! I want mooooooore! I can't wait to see where all this is going. :D - Jenny (http://lazyjenny.deviantart.com)
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