Title: Very short but good. ^^ Reviewed By:HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 22:45 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: First I must say that I loved the angst and how Yuuri came to realize his feelings. Next we have to see what he does to make up for his outburst in the waking world! ^^ I liked your style of writing except that I felt it lacked description and length. Other than that I thought it flowed rather well and the plot was well-developed. There were only a few spelling/graamar errors throughtout which was very good! Not many people start out their fanfics with a dream and for this I think it was very original, especially for the series. ;) I absolutely love the Yuuri & Wolfram pairing and I hope to read more of your fic in the future! Don't give up on it. ^^ I'm sure with more updates you'll have plenty of readers. ;)
