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| "Perfection" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 ] | Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: March 10, 2006 18:52 EST
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I really do hate it sometimes that you make me read yaoi. I'm such a b/v fan but your imagery and descriptions just blow me away and I can't not read. I'm always thinking 'How does Bulma fit into this?' and 'I really hope Vegeta loves her.' That's why Monster was so great I was sastisfied in all areas of the story. Goku is just the empitome of a mortal man, he gets a taste of sin (sin of his world) and can't turn back. Vegeta, oh Vegeta, he's somekind of sensual God/Devil but then the next moment he's so beautifully vunerable. But he's so selfish for coming and shattering Gokus world, intentionally or not. I get so frustrated, why can't Goku be satisfied with his life and why can't Vegeta just be content with himself and purpose. If that was the case though I wouldn't be writing this review, so your doing a good job. Keep it up, even though I'm going insane.
| Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: March 08, 2006 00:33 EST
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I said I'd leave a review so I will! First I want to say your the only one who makes me read yaoi, so stop tempting me!!! Hahaha. I always imagine Goku looking so beautiful in your stories, kinda angelic. Loved this line, 'A nameless space that stood without his footprints upon it.' I just started a writing degree and this really conjured up images that made me want to write! So thanks, you've helped me in my assignment. I also loved the 'beacon' line such a perfect description. Hope to see more from you soon and don't give up, not that you would! Haha. Thanks
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