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Title: WarHawk
Reviewed By: Warhawk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 05:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RUCKING GOOD (thx mirokuFanboy for the word) Excellent plot and I also agree that u need to run Ur story through word and spell check it. Oh and it would help if u stated who's talking to who and better ways to identify who's talking to who, when Rei and Shinji talking as one and such. Can't wait for the up date XD
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Title: scar of the red sea
Reviewed By: 4wako97 On: August 21, 2006 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fic. the plot is well done but has a few plroblems. the spelling and grammer need a little work(when your reading and you run across somthing like that it takes away from the overall enjoyment because you have to stop)and there needs to be more identification when someone is speaking it makes it easier to follow along. aside from that it is quite good and i look foward to the next chapter.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: KakashiRulez [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS SOOO GOOD! omg i love it! plz update verrrrrry soon... *puppie eyes* pleaseeeeeeeeeee. "And I apologise for the lateness of the update. But I had been lazy recently. I apologize and will try to be more regular with my updates. And I'm sorry if the update seems bad. I'll make it up to you guys in the next chapter." damm straight.... update more often... lol
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: mirokuFanboy On: July 07, 2006 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG is all i can say. the plot if FUCKING AMAZING, i admit that there area few grammar and spelling errors, but that dosntmatter really, its RUKED! completelt ruked! i luv it soooooo much!
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Title: gak!
Reviewed By: dhs203 On: July 07, 2006 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gak! this is soooooooooo fucking awsome! keep updating!!! thisis sooo freaking good, i cant say how much i luve this!
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: Shinden On: July 02, 2006 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is even weirder than Suzumiya Haruhi! I like your plot, just a little grammatical error here and there. Another thing: I would suggest finding better ways to identify who's talking to who, with Rei and Shinji talking as one and such. Other than that, A++++++++++++++!!!!!!! I'll wait for updates! ^_____________^ ~Shinden~
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Title: Keep it up
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You sure know how to write a good story.
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Title: eva, sonic fan
Reviewed By: ??? On: June 25, 2006 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1st off, this was funny, but update this and your other fics more, and is it true that you're redoing inescapeable grasp of eva, do 2 losing the orgional versio, if it is, well its going well from what i've read, so udate these fics more often already, ok
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Title: I Fan FIc From Heven
Reviewed By: Megaone08 On: June 07, 2006 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a Great Fan fic. I love it. It so much more better then thos quickly writing pisces of $##^ that I find. I'm Some one who likes Romance and Hentai together in the same story. Most other People put in no Romance in their Hentai Storys, and if they do it's a little bit at the end. You've made a Great Story here keep up the Good Work.
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Reviewed By: AJG On: May 15, 2006 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work, I look forward to seeing how things will play out. Given the rating I must ask, is there a difference between this version and the one on ff.net? Ah well, it has been some good stuff so far. Hope to see how this bond will be employed to screw over Gendo's plans and how he will attempt to either correct or compensate for the bonding. -_-Me-_-
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Title: Very good, indeed!
Reviewed By: Spectator Beholder On: May 15, 2006 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty nice fanfic you've made there! I've seen a few similar attempts/ideas of the concept/idea behind the fanfic, but few of these has been as well-written as yours! Also some good surprises in the story along the way - such as Shinji rising from the dead, scaring the shit out of Gendo XD. Anyway, keep up the good work and update soon! I'm eager too see what'll become of Shinji and Rei, how the people around them (not just Misato & Asuka) will react to their new bound (would for example be fun to see both of them give the same answer, at the same time to the same question in class!), what dastardly plans Gendo may come up with to ultimately separate them, whenever Seele with come to learn of what's happening and so on... in any event: Ganbatte!
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Reviewed By: GemstoneWarrior On: May 13, 2006 02:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way the fanfic is going. Gendo's assassination attempt is going to back fire in his face. he can't kill them and reactivate another "rei' so easily.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn On: April 27, 2006 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
End a chap like that its evil! So hurry and update please.:) Any lemons with Shinji and rei?
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Reviewed By: James Axelrad On: April 15, 2006 19:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORE! its a great fic, and the next chap s off to a great start its definitly one you can have a lot of funwith both their home life, at school, and even the later battles with them synchronized, they would most likely function as to pieces of a single machine, increasing their effectiveness over 2 two units by quite a bit
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Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I am grounded Your story is great 10 I will try and review more Please update faster. PS. I know how school is I am in 8th grade
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