| "Unbreakable Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Zarzer On: April 11, 2006 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story!!! The only thing I have to say is that I want more! So keep it comeing please.
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Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet this story is great interisting. lemons? sorry I am a perv 10out 10 please update
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Reviewed By: third_impact On: March 29, 2006 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how this story is turning out. Maybe if you wanted to go with the angsty side of things you could have Asuka's reaction to it. But you should probably also be careful not to start treating Rei and Shinji as one person, even if they have become very close.
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Reviewed By: tatsu.zzmage@gmail.com On: March 28, 2006 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
heheh great idea, this is the first time ive seen rei and shinji linked, but can you imagin what would have happend if you had tossed asuka into this mix, you might have gained 3 almost normaly balanced people. LOL, though the synced responses might have creaped the class out a whole hell of a lot. or heres a thought the link propagating to the rei-quarium with out the dummyplug interface.
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Reviewed By: !)ark Machine On: March 20, 2006 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know whether you got the idea from this but there was a very similar fic by Ryan T Nelson seemingly aeons ago now. As an avid reader I was dissapointed immensely when it was left unfinished and he dissappeared into obscurity so I am understandably very excited that someone has finally taken up this idea again. Overall your style is good and I noticed no errors in spelling or grammer, a rarity in fics with this rating these days. But the most important thing is that your story is comfortable to read. I'm not straining my eyes to decode syntax nor am I being challenged immensely by complicated words and needless description. Please keep up the good work on a great idea. I'd love to finally see it followed through to its conclusion. Regards, !)ark Machine www.evamade.net
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Title: Satisfied
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 10:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it up Shran. Story is getting interesting and I'm looking forward for the next chapter.
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Title: axelrajr@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: James Axelrad On: March 17, 2006 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic. i am looking forward to the next chater. i figure you could have rei get hurt. that would probably impact shinji too. perhaps gendo tries to seperate them, and they both collapse and fall into unconciousness? that ought to put a damper on gendo's plans.
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 22:19 CST
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I can't wait to read more, I just love the premis and thanks for making it so no one can just replace Rei to fit their plans.
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Reviewed By: blaze417 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 14:42 CST
Comment/Review:
hell ya good story keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Knight2 On: March 14, 2006 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story. I've read something like this before (that story was abandoned). I'm very intrested to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Ovaron [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 00:59 CST
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Very nice. It's interesting how this story's going to turn out, with the psychological link and them having to be near each other all the time. Keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: tafion On: March 12, 2006 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is not truly original, ive read someithing similar before, that being said, i like the direction this story is taking. it does jump righ into a love scene, it builds tension between the 2 that are many couples deal with, ( minus the mem swap, u nkow what im getting at). i think u should continue to walk the path u started to. oh and UPDATE!!!!!! i wanna know what happens next.
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Title: unexpected
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this is quite unexpected way for Rei and Shinji to get to know each other, but keep up with this story and I shall keep on reviewing. I hope that the story continues like I think, which is like the numbers I gave about this story. And I just revised the latest chapter on my story, so I'll be waiting for your review. Check the review list.
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Reviewed By: Ovaron [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this fanfic could shape out to be an excellent piece, keep writing!
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