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| "Thanksgiving?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: darkokita [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2009 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The main reason this is a 9 instead of a 10 is the amount of time between updates. You write very well, and despite the tendency for every fluffy bunny in the world to write holiday related fanfics, I have a feeling that this one might be a little different, more interesting. Certainly, better written than most. Do I need to add that nothing irritates me more then a truly good writer who leaves a great story unfinished? Do you really want to see what I look like after 8 to 12 straight hours of wading through endless miles of useless, incessent crap in order to find that rare gem of a fic; just to have it end right when the story is getting to the best part? Trust me, you don't EVER want to see that. So do yourself a favor, UPDATE!
| Reviewed By: white_rabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 19:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
you started out so strong where is the rest?
| Title: YAAAAY!
Reviewed By: rikku1345 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 17:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it. it good ^_^ keep writing
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