Title: Review For CH1-2
Reviewed By: Psychosis [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing style is outstanding but the grammar was a little off at times. Spelling was correct almost thought everything you have done so far. Your creativity is very good, You clearly have the potential to turn this into a fantastic fantasy story. So far I have enjoyed reading it for the most part. I want to see more though, chapter 2 really leaves you hanging!
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