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| "The Sword of the Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: The Kouga Lucius Connection [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 04:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, this was absolutely beautiful! I must say, when I decided to check out the Samurai 7 fanfiction, I was, needless to say, rather frightened. You never know what you might find, aye? Some sketchy fic where Kyuzo suddenly exclaims "what is this feeling I have for this decidedly beautiful samurai woman with loads of skill? Wow, I think she's broken my icy exterior." But your fanfiction is absolutely a work of genius. Nasami is developed, for one, useful for another, and lastly, she's just kick ass. So I'll be awaiting your update; I'm on fanfiction.net too, but its much easier to search through 5 fanfictions than 105. So I came to mediaminer...and the rest is history. I'll be waiting...:) KOLU
| Title: FFRG
Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 13:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, this first chapter has its promises and a wonderful start in the beginning. I love how you used the knowledge of Japan's culture and its ways into the story. Your first chapter shows that immensely well. What bothered me a bit was the italization of the japanese words, even though in books I've read with japanese words had that format. I don't think that goes well with a fanfiction like yours--though, this is merely only an opinion of mine. Keep writing, you have the talents. :)
| Title: great writer
Reviewed By: yambembi On: May 20, 2006 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am always amazed at how great writers such as yourself are to add a new twist to an existing story without really deferring from it. You wrote Nasami's character as though she was originally part of the story.
| Title: great writer
Reviewed By: yambembi On: May 20, 2006 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am always amazed at how great writers such as yourself are to add a new twist to an existing story without really deferring from it. You wrote Nasami's character as though she was originally part of the story.
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