| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: hi
Reviewed By: animelover55 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! i just read this story and i love it so please update
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: Hello lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so much! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!! please! I have to know what happens!!! UPDATE I PUT YOU IN FAVS!
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Reviewed By: Edy's Grand Ice Cream On: July 11, 2006 10:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay! you updated again! i was so happy when i saw the notify email in my inbox! even tho it was a sad chappie for Yumeko, i still loved it! and im glad that i could help with the reviews. to get more rewiews, you could double-post this fanfic on fanfiction.net if you havnt already. most of my friends do that, but they say its a pain to take the extra time to post it again. owell. this is still one of my favorite fanfics, and i definetly look forward to your next update. ^^
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Title: Great!!!
Reviewed By: Tsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next update!!! I am so excited! I was looking through the fanart when I came across Youkai Yume's cute little picture of Kagome and Human Sesshomaru. It sparked my interests and I began reading your fanfiction the very same day, and I think that it's awesome! e-mail me when the next update comes around okies? inuyasha_with_a_bad_attitude01@yahoo.com JA NE!!
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Title: GREAT JOB!!!!!
Reviewed By: 2SEXY4U On: July 07, 2006 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like ur story alot!!! it's awsome!!! u r a good writer i wish i could be like that........................but i suck.........................................*sigh* o well i guse i could get over it.....................................................................well any ways update soon or i'll sue!!!! XD
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Reviewed By: Edy's Grand Ice Cream On: May 08, 2006 15:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a really great fanfic. im sad that you decided to not post untill you get 10 reviews. i would do more, but i think this only counts as one... how bout you make this count as 10? i'll make it extra long so you can be happy. then i will be happy when you update. :) i really like where this can go, and i think you have great potential as a writer. keep up the good work!!! (was it long enough?) ;)
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Reviewed By: blonde genious On: April 23, 2006 14:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
sup?!! :) this is a great fan fic!!! yay!!! i love it. seriously, this is fricken awesome!!! could you put more of kakashi in it??? he is pretty sweet y'know... yay! :)
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Reviewed By: secret shinobi On: March 17, 2006 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!!! this is a great fanfic. i think u should put more kakashi, but thats just me.*loves kakashi* anyways, this is a great fanfic. i cant wait for the next post!!
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Reviewed By: Ox King On: March 16, 2006 13:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating. Chapters 2 and 3 were fun. I think you should add in the thoughts of Rin and Kakashi and what they think of Yumeko. Ya, other peoples point of view besides Yumeko would be good.
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Reviewed By: Ox King On: March 12, 2006 01:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I liked the idea that you started off with your original character starting at the age when Kakashi was a kid. There are not very many stories floating around like that. I have high hopes for this story. Please keep up with the good work. Thanks.
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