| "Demons of No Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Fuuko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2009 13:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fanfic on what could have happened if the village of Konoha had been slightly different. The emotions and thoughts are very realistic, very good job.
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Title: ::sadness::
Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 00:09 CST
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My poor Naruto-kun... How could they do this to him? ::anger of the Twitch kind:: Those foul beasts of ass-rapedom must be crushed like the mere insects they are! ::arms his digitally controlled long range Rail Gun and target locks the black ops, while targeting Konoha with the SDF-1's Reflex Cannon:: The personal touch, while preferred, is not a good idea against Ninja (at least those that appear in anime and Seagal movies), so digital firing is chosen over power armor combat. I was freaked out when I saw the dates for the chapters. If you could come back to this story after 2 years then maybe Zendura will finish his stories. Though I hate for Naruto to be in pain and suffer as he does in your story, I still read such stories, and even keep links to them in my browser. I feel so bad for Naruto, and the way you described Konoha has set off another bout of imagining their deaths at the hands of beings that make Cthulhu and his fellow Old Ones quiver in abject fascination at such creativity, without warping reality. Update within the next 15 years. Ja ne. The Goliath's Commandment - Let us feast upon our foes so that they shall know the true meaning of Fear! And for the enjoyment of all... The Goliath's Commandment - When I am angry, I get the urge to reduce a planets population by 95%... at the bare minimum Hanicas on the abuse Naruto recieves. The Goliath's Commandment - In accordance with Statute seventy-two, Subsection thirteen, Paragraph four of the Auschwitz Act: If you do not except these terms I will be legally required to destroy EVERYTHING within a 5000 mile radius. In accordance with Statute one, Subsection one, Paragraph one of the Spiral Maelstrom Act: I am legally permitted to ANNIHILATE EVERYTHING within a four-hundred-thousand light-year radius. And to tell you the truth… there isn't anything within four-hundred-thousand light-years that I consider worth keeping Three of them this time. Lock and load, Operation: Frisky Dingo is in effect, and I want to see how many Jounin I can shred from orbit with my rail gun. (If you cannot tell, I am a Rifts buff)
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Title: Tell-me-more
Reviewed By: Inuyasha 303 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Hello!?!? another chapter please! I didint review last time, sorry about that but, I really like this story and would like to see how it ends. Thank you
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 19:50 CST
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this is really kool. i hope u update this story really soon. plz.
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Reviewed By: kurogai15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 23:39 CST
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This story is really good. You can actually feel a connection between you and Naruto. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: LCAR [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 04:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sad vrey sad but i love it
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 00:08 CST
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I'm glad you update and can't wait for the next chapters I really hope Sasuke and Naruto connect this is so sad just yet. Update again soon!
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Title: Damn that's sad.
Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
god DAMN that made me so SAD. I could FEEL the pain he was going through. It seriously made me want to cry. Though I gotta ask. Is Sasuke a demon carrier to? The story said somthing like, 'Does he know about me?' or somthing like that. I was wondering if he was a container. And I somehow don't think that Kyuubi would agree to Naruto killing himself to set the both of them free. It just seems like Kyuu doesn't know what's going on with the blond kitsune. So I ak you to please PLEASE update soon. Please? Arie Date.
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Reviewed By: Dark Gothic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gah i love this story please update soon =^.^=
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 09:41 CDT
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hey this is a really great story i really like it and i cant wait to see what happends next so please update it really soon thanks tootles.
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