| "The Dancer" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Lady Reia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 09:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very sweet, like it ^.^ Somethin new also, so would you could you pweeeeasy write more *begs* Reia~
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Title: o_o?
Reviewed By: Ebony & Ivory On: July 26, 2006 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was original and very creative, but it didn't keep our attention very well. You didn't put spaces between each paragraph and it was basically one large chunk of text, making it difficult to read. There were a few typos, like when you meant to type "gay" and it came out as "gar". Unfortunately, we didn't find it interesting enough to keep us wanting another chapter. It was dry and dull. Add some excitement and make Kai stop drabbling so much. The story completely changed at that point.
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Reviewed By: Yuki Kitazawa On: May 20, 2006 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a lovely little story. If you could, would you tell me when you update? I would love to see more stories from you, I also want to see how this finishes. Contact me at: yukikogin@hotmail.com
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Title: T.T
Reviewed By: emo black chick On: April 13, 2006 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I loved this fic, sad to say when I got to the bottom I was looking for the next chapter link. I coulnd't find it so I looked at the top, as I fratically searched for more I saw the upload date and I started to cry, I can't wait for more, and for Kai's song! Good job tying me into the story. ~Hugglez~
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Reviewed By: danyaangel On: March 29, 2006 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome ^___^ Hope you update soon!
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